Wandering around in a steady gait
Expressionless eyes, impassive face
The Dreamseller journeys,
Through the paths of life.
Alone he walks, allowing none to be by his side
“Relationships enrich people’s lives,
But some are destined to remain alone!”
He brings happiness to people,
Crying himself within;
Never letting the world guess,
What pain lies beneath.
Loving and caring unconditionally,
A complain never escapes his lips.
He personifies hope, coloring the lives of all those
Who choose to look up to him.
People wonder, “Is he a human?”
For his eyes never betray emotions;
Yet they are soft and kind,
Showering others with peace and comfort.
However, those close to him, often find,
A glistening tear, rolling down the cheek;
Deftly he wipes it off,
Replacing that with a serene smile.
Like the Moon above, whom he passionately loves,
He touches others’ lives,
Himself remaining untouched.
There goes the Dreamseller…
He belongs to the whole world,
2 comments:
b4 i say nething abt d poem...i wanna say that d pic sumhow reminds me of Amitabh Bachhan...neways...now cummin bac 2 d poem...luved it...deep down inside i can sumhow relate to it...
~_` Ahoy ^^!
As a matter of fact da very start of da poem is here is damn appealin...i love da way it continues to engross da reader wid all da fludity in it...n trust me its probably ur best wrks so far...
" . “Relationships enrich people’s lives,
But some are destined to remain alone!”
He brings happiness to people,
Crying himself within;
Never letting the world guess,
What pain lies beneath. . "
This one here is 1 of my fav parts...I hv to tell u tht it comprises da most enigmatic n lovely phase of da song uve pennd down...its simply sublime a fact...which is nt a rarity in tdays scenario considerin da fact dat everytym da ones who impart bliss via love hardly encounter da very facet of ders which longs fr sum warmth aswell..'Tis lovin in vain aswell which causes pain, beyond destruction...n u kno after a period of tym...u grow rigid...which may nt b a gud sign...fr u begin to detach frm emotions...
Nd ths part here
" . Like the Moon above, whom he passionately loves,
He touches others’ lives,
Himself remaining untouched.
There goes the Dreamseller…
He belongs to the whole world,
To him belongs none. "
Its simply splendid n perhaps da best way u cud hv ended da poem here...bt da thot lingers on n on fr da poem is damn charismatic...Its simple truth manifested in wrds...n dats wat comprises da most appealin part of ur poem...in every nuk n corner...M in love wid da dreamseller after readin ths thot of urs...he he ^_^ n i seriously din want it to end...bt thn...da magic is summin which shall stay on n on...fr a very long tym...Superb piece of writin...Must say... Gr8 wrk man!... :)
keep doin da same...wid a difference... "_" :D
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